Original Images

Magazine advert original image

Digi Pak original images

Front Cover

Track List/ Back cover

Side Panel

Inside Panel

Location Shots

Roof Top

Rachel's bedroom

Katie's bedroom

Magazine ad first draft

Reviews of music video second draft

Ive asked people to watch the second draft of my music video and give me comments nd feedback so I can develop off it.

Olivia, 17 years old : "I like it alot. I think it's really cool and fits well for the song. Really like the dancing shots"
Initial ideas for improvement

colours & Lighting

• experiment more with them...
• flashing between the colours
• 2x main colours work throughout the video  

- pink and teal
- purple and yellow 
- any complimentary colours

•   Flash fade to white at the end from the colour... suggests content? happiness? heaven?
• Brighten the begining... its too dark

music video Second Draft

I have re- editied my Music video. So far I am much more happier with what I have created.

• I have changed the actress doing the peformacne in the video, to create a realistic effect she sang all of the lyrics. 
• Re editied some of the colours layered over the clips.

music video First Draft

My First Draft clearly shows that it is not complete. There are blank sections which will be filled as im in the process of doing more filming.

• Change the colours: it looks slightly unprofessional with all the over layers.
• R-e film peformance aspects with new actress
• Film sections of Katie getting into the car. 
• Film extra shots

Editing/ Update

Recently I have began editing. I found that from doing this I have really seen my first draft comming together.
The editing has shown me that I've struggled to show the bright colours which i had originally intended on doing on all the clips. I found that it is all too much and can look exsessive. Instead I eant to take a simplicitic approach and begin with earthy tones and slowly progress to colour. This demonstates the progression of the video and their relationship.
I have completed a rough first draft. However, there are some blank spaces. These are done on purpose as their are still aspects I need to film/ Re- film.

On the 10th of October, I will be re-shooting the performance section of the music video. Originally I had filmed myself so I had footage to work with whilst editing. However, I have found the perfect actress for this role and will be filming her.