Reviews of music video second draft

Ive asked people to watch the second draft of my music video and give me comments nd feedback so I can develop off it.

Olivia, 17 years old : "I like it alot. I think it's really cool and fits well for the song. Really like the dancing shots"
Initial ideas for improvement

colours & Lighting

• experiment more with them...
• flashing between the colours
• 2x main colours work throughout the video  

- pink and teal
- purple and yellow 
- any complimentary colours

•   Flash fade to white at the end from the colour... suggests content? happiness? heaven?
• Brighten the begining... its too dark